no rhyme, no reason, no character the poem had no relationship with an ancient mariner the words just stumbled along looking for a home the poem even sought advice from the garden gnome
even the writing muse shook her head she said no line could be writ with a golden thread despite the obstacles the poem kept trudging along the page had to be filled come right or wrong
and then in a dream the character appeared a hero who said there was nothing to be feared said she, the words you seek are a dime a dozen and most are as enjoyable as a kissing cousin
the poem was ecstatic, giggling with delight the ideas kept coming day and night adieu the hero said, my job is done here she said the poems model should be Shakespeare
so is this a sonnet, to be or not to be probably. with just an extra quatrain, as you can see
Senryu: 5 , 7 , 5 syllables with people and their emotions as a subject.
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anger starts with fear
we didn’t get what we wanted
you took advantage
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Poem:
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gentle waves of warm water cover the feet the sun providing a glorious bone warming heat any day at the beach will soothe the soul nature reinforcing that God is in control
evolution is such a marvelous thing only the crazy to the past want to cling revolution is not necessarily evolution anarchy is never a very good solution
peace, make love not war use science to give everyone more think of the consequences, not just the profits believe that the Creator knows more than the prophets
predicting the future we all must agree it is as easy as following the greed why listen to entertainers and TV show host their agenda is not as friendly as Casper the Ghost
today, be kind, be loving and watch what you say and when all else fails, take the time to pray .
ME and the Boss Poetry 