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“Deep feeling
doesn’t make
for good poetry.
A way with language
would be a bit
of help.”
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~ Thom Gunn
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Elfje:
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feel
sad, glad
write the words
does it make sense
poetry
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Haiku:
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bugs ate the blossoms
nature cares for every one
pests need to eat too
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Poem:
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happiness is a poem
feelings left open
stories to be told
opinions uncontrolled
from a to zed
the living and the dead
words come alive
ideas on overdrive
enjoy the effort
call it desert
and when it’s done
concede to fun
forever butterflies
smelly teas roses
affections displayed
hearts accolade
emotions showing
senses growing
read and write
connoisseurs delight
for good poetry
it was a way with language.
ME and the Boss
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